Thursday, May 22, 2008

Through

Through


she drifts away

slowly, bit by bit,

ever so slightly,

she gravitates

her presence is missing

and there's a hole in my day

where she used to be

part of me, left with her

tearing away, breaking free

the intensity has faded

into dull strangers

walking casually by in the hallway

late for something more important

our lives separate,

once united, now pulled apart

she'd had enough

and now I'm done lying

I'm through.

5 comments:

Peanuts Gallery said...

I don't understand what she is lying about. But I love the descriptions. You are talented writer.

steelersrock said...

Though it makes me feel really mad alike that the way the poem makes me feel.

Chickncheese said...

I think that you are such an amazing writer, and I love all your depressing poems. Nice job "Blank."

blancaynegra said...

This poem really makes you think. It doesn't straight up give you the full story, so you kind of have to make it up yourself. I love writing that does that.

Anonymous said...

I love how it doesn't tell you the full story and so you kind of have to make the story up yourself.