Short, but you managed the deppressing imagery. Great writing, but I've never heard of a Cinquain.
Stealer of ideas! It's ok though; don't worry about it. Still, nice poem and I love how you did it in about 5 lines. Very impressive. (No sarcasm intended *Cough* *Cough*)PSI'm not a very good speller; in case I got any of the words wrong.
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Short, but you managed the deppressing imagery. Great writing, but I've never heard of a Cinquain.
Stealer of ideas! It's ok though; don't worry about it. Still, nice poem and I love how you did it in about 5 lines. Very impressive. (No sarcasm intended *Cough* *Cough*)
PS
I'm not a very good speller; in case I got any of the words wrong.
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