looking around in a confused blur
as blood dripped down her leg
broken glass lies everywhere
shattered from a windshield
but how had she gotten here?
when she looks up she saw a pale blue sky
and the top of a small hill
the fence broken from a heavy impact
pictures fall into place as she sees a shinny silver car door on the ground
and bits of metal scattered around with the leaves
the cool Autumn breeze blows through her hair
as she suddenly screams in shock
as she she realizes what just happened
she rushes to find the car
the new silver paint-almost completely scratched off
the car lay upside down cradled between two large rocks
her head started to spin as she remembered her driver
she had been the passenger in this tragic accident
she slowly made her way to the drivers window
only to find the car empty when she looked in
surprised and slightly confused
she searches around for her brother
she finds nothing but broken parts of his car
silence follows as she tries to decipher this mystery
she decides to go get help
so she trudges up the green hill
there before her is a deserted road with no one to help her
a piece of paper flitted about in the wind moving swiftly but smoothly
she catches it and sees that the ink is a crimson red
she focuses on the words and blocks out her pain for just enough time to read
it's you next
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Frightening, frightening, where do you come up with these things? I want to read more about this story. Please, pretty please write more. This one is doable because there has been no tragic end yet. By the way, you spelled shiny wrong, it isn't "shinny". Sorry I metioned that, I tend to point out people's errors. Great story.
Creepy. Alot of the stories on this blog are creepy. What was on the paper? I think it was a will of her brother. It made no sense on how he was gone. It is kind of scary to think that these kind of things happpen to actual people.
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