ok I wrote a happy poem for all those people complaining of my depressingness, but don't say I didn't warn you. I told all of you guys that I couldn't write a happy poem to save my life. For the record I told you so.
love
is controlling
is obliterating
is incomprehensible
it makes you go back on everything you once believed
contradict yourself by rethinking everything you every thought
it flings you head over heals into the great unknown
and makes you smile as you come spiraling down into heartbreak
it makes your decision for you
and your world catches on blazing fire
it also makes you smile.
and laugh.
and cry.
and hurt, hurt hurt,
love likes to make you hurt.
but in the end it always wins
there is no fighting your heart
your brain might fleetingly disagree
but you can't do anything but go down with a smile
there is no way to fight the immeasurable force
that comes unexpectedly out of no where
once you fall in
you can't crawl back out again,
of this crazy little thing called love.
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AMAZING POEM!!!!!
I never thought anyone could make even love seem sad, and hopeless but you managed it. It was a lovely and well written but depressing. I do love how you used the quote "crazy little thing called love".
This is the "happy" poem??
What exactly is your definiton of "happy"? The poem was very well-written, but was it actually "happy"?
Nice
You are a very good poet. I like your style of writing. BUt if this is your "happy" poem, i want to read your depressing and sad poems.
I think its really good. I don't think its that happy... but it isn't depressing. I still think that it is really good and well writen and thought out.
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