this one if for all those people who are complaining about my depressing poetry, this is for you:
she looks down
the ground lays 7 stories beneath her feet
her heart strarts to pump with adrenaline
her feet inch closer and closer to the edge
the promise of darkness bekons her foward
of a world where emptiness awaits her,
where she doesn't have to feel the pain
of the cruel world.
so with one last breath
she flings herself over the edge of the building
and with one hard hit where her body meets the concrete
she greets her awaiting world of omnipresent darkness
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oooooooo you are not very nice because hate is not a nice word so dont HATE!!!!!!!
Oh boy.
You're really trying to depress me aren't you.
Will you ever write about puppies, rainbows and snowflakes?!
Wow...
I wondered if that ever happened.
Maybe not, it would be very scary.
Can you at least take catherine's word??????
I hurt...:(
this is a really depressing poem but I personally think that your poetry is wonderful, just the subjects you pick are a little morbid. Try writing about something happy.
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